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March 31, 2004

After the show

this smudged black handstamp
delivers today's coffee
postmarked from last night

haiku.

Posted by didofoot at March 31, 2004 06:02 PM

Comments

people always check
the number of syllables.
don't be so anal.

Posted by: holohan at March 31, 2004 06:19 PM

That was very nice
And the syllables were fine
Haikus are timeless

Posted by: kati at March 31, 2004 10:27 PM

It's so pretentious
We can count up to seven
Pats on the back, yeah!

;-)

Posted by: Clint at April 1, 2004 05:47 AM

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